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Oh! Shirt!
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Oh, shit !

大概是买了个衬衫觉得很好看

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I'm very want to      a friend.
 ^^ ^^^^
I really want to make a friend.

这就是传说中的 be dovery do 吗?!

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But I'm very shcore.
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But I'm very shy   .

这是什么单词? 硬修吧

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Oh! My school food is a bad.
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Oh! My school food is   bad.

你看吧, 老师说什么来着, 冠词 后面加 adj.

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Now! I'm don't like eat    school's food.
^^^   ^^            ^^^          ~~
     I   don't like eating school food.

现在激励时!要用现在一般式 梅开二度(be do) 传奇like do 一致一点不好吗(school's food)?

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Can your know me?
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Do you know why?

我的知道怎么了? 我为什么要认识你? 又不提供姓名…

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oh! I like eat    some luke food.
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Oh! I like eating some luck food.

梅开二度(like do) 路克是什么食物? 幸运食物又是什么食物??!

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But my mother is dArrot me eat some.
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But my mother disagrees me to eat these.

梅开三度(be do) to do 变成 ToDo(待办清单)

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She tell  me:
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She tells me,

动词考虑什么?用啥!

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"Their is a luck food! It's not healthy."
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"There is   luck food! It's not healthy."

他们的是… 不可数名词考虑什么?冠词!

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Oh! What can I see?
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Oh! What can I say?

假如给我三天光明, 我就能看见牢大的经典语录了

全文:

Oh, shit! I really want to make a friend. But I’m very shy. Oh! My school food is bad. I don’t like eating school food. Do you know why? Oh! I like eating some luck food. But my mother disagrees me to eat these. She tells me, “There is luck food! It’s not healthy.” Oh! What can I say?

看来这篇作文很燃, 一堆 Oh! 所以说为什么你不喜欢吃学校的食物???

翻译:

该死!我真的很想交个朋友。但我很害羞。哦!我的学校食物很糟糕。我不喜欢吃学校的食物。你知道为什么吗? 哦!我喜欢吃一些幸运的食物。但我妈妈不同意我吃这些。她告诉我,“有幸运食物!这不健康。”哦!我能说什么呢?

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